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Pathetic
Contributed by
BlackAndWhite
on
Saturday, 14th February 2009 @ 02:33:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
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it must really suck to be you
always in a bad mood
is life really so bad?
every second of each day you spend mad?
maybe you oughta quit
change your name, change your address
probably wont clean up your mess
but at least the rest of us wont have to deal with it
misery loves company, and you invite crowds
youd be better off if youd learn to shut your mouth
but you always have something to say
and you never feel right til you mess up someone elses day
theres a word for people like you
give me a second to think of it
wait, itll come to me
oh yeah, youre PATHETIC
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BlackAndWhite
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2009-02-14 14:33:48]
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Re: Pathetic
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th February 2009 @ 04:39:22 PM AEST
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very passionate and poignant, good work.
-phil |
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Re: Pathetic
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by ItsMeNow on
Saturday, 21st February 2009 @ 11:08:28 AM AEST
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| LOL I like it haha! Its really good we all know someone like that... |
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Re: Pathetic
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by 12161216 on
Saturday, 4th April 2009 @ 01:13:22 PM AEST
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I like it because I can relate to it. Just hate those people who just HAVE to mess up someone else to be happy. Just hate them!
Great job for writing on something that needs to be adressed :D |
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