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Valentinus
Contributed by
navydocny
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Friday, 13th February 2009 @ 05:22:42 PM in AEST
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Most divinely sacred of gifts I bequest
Your reward of glorious offspring and fervor
My love never faltered as did my rest
Now spurned through this, my chosen endeavor
Reclaiming lost ardor, most demanding affair
Why not salvage our wondrous prize?
If all is truly lost, there is no call for despair
Everything with time eventually dies
But I had as did you, adoration so fair
Adulation and promise of all so much more
One look of me is all that it takes to ensnare
Your kindness I continue to implore
On this day of love, my thoughts are of you
And of how my love, for you remains true
Copyright ©
navydocny
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Re: Valentinus
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 13th February 2009 @ 06:18:02 PM AEST
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I hope she is overwhelmed with happiness when she reads this.
A great announcement of your love for her
Steve |
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Re: Valentinus
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 13th February 2009 @ 06:50:34 PM AEST
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This is really lovely, Doc....
Happy Valentines to you and yours....
Jenni |
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Re: Valentinus
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th February 2009 @ 06:38:27 PM AEST
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this is the sort of poetry i can appreciate. it's full of deep meaning, is meticulously crafted and full of so many beautiful words. i can feel your affection ooze off the screen, my friend. superb, a master at his finest.
-phil
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Re: Valentinus
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by emystar on
Sunday, 15th February 2009 @ 06:56:50 PM AEST
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Dear friend,
if this don't melt her heart nothing will.
Very touching, real, deep, deep, deep.
Huggs, blessings,
emy
Late Happy Valentines to you.
Stay safe.
Valentines huggs, blessings,
emy
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Re: Valentinus
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 19th February 2009 @ 06:07:54 PM AEST
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| This is a truly beautiful poem and I am sure she is a truly beautiful woman. |
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