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Criminals are an infection
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
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Thursday, 12th February 2009 @ 06:41:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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criminals are the infection
Their like a disease
they run through the city
all I can hear is boom boom boom
sound of a gun going off
we need a cure
to make our city pure
rid us of this infection
cure this disease
but what can we do
this infection over powers me and you
we are deep in the sickness
that falls all around
the sound of this disease is like a cough or sneeze
but the sound of this disease is
boom boom boom
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2009-02-12 18:41:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Criminals are an infection
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 13th February 2009 @ 02:41:00 PM AEST (User
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yes, an interesting look at the criminal world. a good description of criminals actually, comparing them to an infection. good work.
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Re: Criminals are an infection
(User Rating: 1 ) by navydocny on
Friday, 13th February 2009 @ 07:52:31 PM AEST (User
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Very good write...
Great descriptions and visual...
Keep up the great work!
Steve |
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