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Please Let Me Cry
Contributed by
ChiChizz
on
Tuesday, 10th February 2009 @ 11:12:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Please let me cry
Now that you leave away
Where my arms can’t reach
And there you’re going to stay
Where my eyes can’t see
How are we supposed to meet?
Where my screams won’t be heard
Why do you go so far?
Where my legs can’t chase
Please let me cry
So that my tears become an ocean
Until the day I die
Until I can swim within my tears
Then I will come, looking for you
Please let me cry
Copyright ©
ChiChizz
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2009-02-10 23:12:36]
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Re: Please Let Me Cry
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th February 2009 @ 11:16:30 PM AEST
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mmmm I want to cry... very emotional poem
and very sorry
take care
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Re: Please Let Me Cry
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by ChiChizz on
Tuesday, 10th February 2009 @ 11:17:55 PM AEST
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| Wow that was really quick. |
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Re: Please Let Me Cry
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 10th February 2009 @ 11:57:35 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC,
this is a heart felt write, very sad. I am sorry for your loss.
Michelle |
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Re: Please Let Me Cry
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by PreciousKitten on
Thursday, 12th February 2009 @ 09:46:42 PM AEST
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| this is a good work of poem. i really do like it. |
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