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Regrettably
Contributed by
ChiChizZle
on
Tuesday, 10th February 2009 @ 08:12:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I love you
Do you love me too?
No?
Well I hope that girl you love says that about you
I hope she turns your back on you now
Like you did to me then
And then I hope you cry,
And wake up with swollen eyes
As much as I did then
And then I wish you’d suffer in bed
Trying to get her off your mind
As much as I did then
Those are all desires, aspirations
That will never come true
Because, alas,
She is happy with you
And I am alone
Copyright ©
ChiChizZle
... [
2009-02-10 08:12:07]
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Re: Regrettably
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th February 2009 @ 10:06:12 AM AEST
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really nice poem... I like it!!! and hope everything will be ok with you
cheers |
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Re: Regrettably
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by BornReckless on
Wednesday, 11th February 2009 @ 01:13:11 PM AEST
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| Emotional write, good job. |
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Re: Regrettably
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by ItsMeNow on
Thursday, 12th February 2009 @ 05:05:48 PM AEST
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| I've read all your works posted here and I think they are good you write well. And most importantly what you've written about and how you put it on paper invokes emotions and thats when people can relate. |
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