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Contributed by
blueheart
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Tuesday, 10th February 2009 @ 12:46:59 AM in AEST
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If days were dressed with honest smiles,
And lives, they flourish over time,
If people are loved without reason or rhyme,
Then maybe I am empty.
If every void soon flowed with colour,
And silent cries are cloaked with laughter,
If dormant faith arises with splendour,
Then surely I am empty.
If dreams they never fell apart,
And hearts were strong right from the start,
If hope, from tears they do impart,
It hurts that I am empty.
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Re: Empty
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 10th February 2009 @ 03:04:53 AM AEST
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some times the feeling of emptiness haunts us. when we become active it leaves automatically..
better that you started again. best of luck:-) venkat |
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Re: Empty
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th February 2009 @ 03:36:55 AM AEST
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I like it, unfortunatel it is so close to me ... I understand you
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Re: Empty
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 10th February 2009 @ 05:32:02 AM AEST
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truly sadly beautiful, excellent style here,
love n' hugs nessa
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Re: Empty
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Tuesday, 10th February 2009 @ 07:29:06 AM AEST
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You said what you needed to say without wasting unecessary words to get your point across.
Well done
Steve |
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Re: Empty
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 10th February 2009 @ 12:24:08 PM AEST
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I so relate to this. I am glad you came back to post.
f people are loved without reason or rhyme,
Then maybe I am empty.
That statement right there is so near me and my heart.
I think you have done a wonderful job with this right.
Keep writing and you take care.
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Empty
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 11th February 2009 @ 05:43:29 AM AEST
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really nice poem i like it very much
cheers |
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