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~Wyoming Winds~
Contributed by
shelby
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Monday, 9th February 2009 @ 11:32:40 PM in AEST
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The fog enfolded us in a blanket
on this wayward interstate.
Just us, furbabies and the big truck.
And that biting old Wyoming wind.
There are no lights to penetrate the darkness.
No chatter on the CB
just the sound of tires on pavement
and Wyoming Winds howling.
Two am our eyes are tired.
Gillette is still a ways away.
Second drop, in the darkness
we go along our way.
The dawn has not yet roused
and there is a sight for soar eyes.
Herd of deer coming down off the mountains
Out the door I go, no surprise.
Climbing up the hill I go,
camera in cold hands towed
what a sight to see this early
I stand and shiver in Wyoming Winds.
Copyright ©
shelby
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2009-02-09 23:32:40]
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Re: ~Wyoming Winds~
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th February 2009 @ 12:29:09 AM AEST
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| A very nice picture about your trek through Wyoming. Thank you. :-) |
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Re: ~Wyoming Winds~
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th February 2009 @ 12:30:04 AM AEST
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| So, ya gonna send some pics of the deer? :-) |
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Re: ~Wyoming Winds~
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by Recyclebin on
Tuesday, 10th February 2009 @ 12:39:36 AM AEST
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made me feel the wind.... Where I live in Utah and have been to wyoming many times this picture you painted in my mind was very real.
Damn ur such a good writer... always read ur writings.
Thanks for sharing... this was ace!
~Bin~ |
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Re: ~Wyoming Winds~
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by zenith66 on
Tuesday, 10th February 2009 @ 05:59:17 AM AEST
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| yes a windy and wonderful trip through your eyes, lovely evocative writing here, a great job of really making us feel that cold darkness, that wonderfull power that nature awes us with time and again, great stuff, very simple and very very good!!! |
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Re: ~Wyoming Winds~
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by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 11th February 2009 @ 04:17:36 PM AEST
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MMMM oh this is beautiful, you've
out done yourself again shell, i love
the feel of the tittle and the tension
of the flow of that open road, simply
beautiful, your artistry is breath taking . . .
Thank you likewise for your
read and comment, once in
awhile i need to walk on the
darks side, since i no longer
can walk on the wild side . . .
((((Michelle))))
Ben : ) |
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Re: ~Wyoming Winds~
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 13th February 2009 @ 05:49:55 PM AEST
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Well I've never been to Wyoming but I feel as if I've been given a little bit of the character of the place by your portrayal here.
Lovely write
Steve |
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Re: ~Wyoming Winds~
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 14th February 2009 @ 07:24:08 PM AEST
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| This is a very good poem. i enjoyed it! |
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