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I want to be invisible from others gaze
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
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Sunday, 8th February 2009 @ 12:15:17 AM in AEST
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Smoke going up in a haze
Hiding from everyone’s gaze
The smoke is just my house or mirrors
It hides me so I can trick others into believing their fears
But when the smoke clears
and they notice it wasn’t their fears
that it was only me
now that they can see
what do I do
I might be through
I need a new haze
I want to be invisible from others gaze
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Re: I want to be invisible from others gaze
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by emystar on
Sunday, 8th February 2009 @ 04:54:30 AM AEST
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Sad but great writing, friend.
huggs, blessings,
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Re: I want to be invisible from others gaze
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by venkat on
Sunday, 8th February 2009 @ 11:53:14 PM AEST
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Very interesting..it gives some food to mind.
I don't know whether it is sad.. but it is cute.
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