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Crow like Fate
Contributed by
navydocny
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Friday, 6th February 2009 @ 09:00:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The crow like fate waits for its indulgence
Hapless soul left for dying in the sun
Suffering lost love’s strongest allurance
Can what has passed be truly undone?
Ants come like time, taking portions away
Little by little, the rigor will fade
Robust life falls ashen and grey
Without you become an unwoven brocade
From that day to this no loss as with this
Corporal offering that others may live
Memories of that final last kiss
Naught left but thoughts to only relive
The crow does summon, its caw harkens fate
Forgiveness and love, it’s never too late
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navydocny
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Re: Crow like Fate
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by shelby on
Friday, 6th February 2009 @ 09:38:07 PM AEST
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Beautiful write, though a bit sad.
Be safe over there my friend. Miss ya
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Crow like Fate
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by ammar on
Saturday, 7th February 2009 @ 07:35:25 AM AEST
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Yes, quite beautiful witha a remarkable flow.
Keep writing
ammar |
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Re: Crow like Fate
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 7th February 2009 @ 05:26:32 PM AEST
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a most moving write, im not a fan of crows, so i hope some happier birds now grace your days, be safe,
love n' hugs nessa |
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Re: Crow like Fate
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by Mars on
Saturday, 7th February 2009 @ 11:10:38 PM AEST
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| Yes, sad... isn't it? The political figures don't have to go into battle themselves... and if they did... this would be a much more peaceful world. Keep writing =). |
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Re: Crow like Fate
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by emystar on
Saturday, 7th February 2009 @ 11:34:52 PM AEST
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Hello dear, dear friend,
I don't like crows either.
I feel so honered to have you share your time there.
You are definently a strong and brave man.
stay safe, huggs, luv, blessings,
emy
May your joy be filled to the brim.
I know it has to be hard witnesing such travastry over there. |
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Re: Crow like Fate
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by Recyclebin on
Tuesday, 10th February 2009 @ 12:46:59 AM AEST
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Very good write..of course couldnt expect anything else but good from you my friend.
~Bin~ |
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