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OUT THA DOOR, DOOR, DOOR...
Contributed by
emystar
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Friday, 6th February 2009 @ 04:12:09 AM in AEST
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Had to talk to my man
Called you up on tha phone.
Said, "I miss you dear so much."
Twas only wenesday, Saturday, not long.
"You miss me" he Said,
"It's only the middle of week."
I said,
"oh, I missed ya when ya
Walked out tha door, door, door.........
As soon as ya walked out
tha door, door, door...........
My man comes once a week.
He works long and hard
To make his living like all.
Once a Week for me he ain't tired.
Was ralking on our tele phones,
Chatting to feel our touch.
Told ya how much I missed ya
And long for our luv-n-such.
Copyright ©
emystar
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2009-02-06 04:12:09]
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Re: OUT THA DOOR, DOOR, DOOR...
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Friday, 6th February 2009 @ 06:37:13 AM AEST
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| the effect of distance in relationships |
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Re: OUT THA DOOR, DOOR, DOOR...
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 6th February 2009 @ 06:16:24 PM AEST
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You continue singing those happy songs, my friend.....
Hugs and best wishes....
Jen Jen |
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Re: OUT THA DOOR, DOOR, DOOR...
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 7th February 2009 @ 09:33:04 PM AEST
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luv-n-such ... uh-huh :P
I really liked this one. It put a smile on my face. Thank you for sharing it with the rest of us.
Take care,
Tim |
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Re: OUT THA DOOR, DOOR, DOOR...
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by Recyclebin on
Tuesday, 10th February 2009 @ 12:50:10 AM AEST
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Emy .. you always write such great stuff... this made me smile...
~Bin~ *rings emy* Well Hello my Dear friend... just wanted ya to know I missed Ya!!! |
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Re: OUT THA DOOR, DOOR, DOOR...
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by dark_poet on
Wednesday, 11th February 2009 @ 11:19:02 AM AEST
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not much rhyming but the flow and meaning of your piece was there. very unique and creative.
keep it up |
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