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turning point
Contributed by
elle
on
Monday, 2nd February 2009 @ 08:17:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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how did we reach this turning point?
desires' short journey, spent.
a random longing, once fulfilled.
now ill, at what we meant.
did you not love
the thought of me?
did I not hold you dear?
my heart will never bare the weight.
I cannot chance the fear. . .
& mark this space
that seperates,
intent on holding on. . .
a glance, a touch
a precious moment,
for all our grasping, gone.
no doubt,
my comfort is displaced.
I wait
throughout each day
among the thoughts & words,
our past. . .
without a saving grace.
& where are you
my once dear friend,
now that you've traveled on?
do thoughts of me still linger, sweet?
will my memory
lure you home?
Copyright ©
elle
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2009-02-02 20:17:29]
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Re: turning point
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by Jason_Robert_Britt on
Wednesday, 4th February 2009 @ 04:18:27 AM AEST
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| The days seem to tear away all those we find familiar, let memories be unto you like an ancient standing pillar. |
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Re: turning point
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th February 2009 @ 05:57:34 PM AEST
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| This echoes the very same thoughts I've had of someone. It definitely brings tears to the eyes. So beautifully written! ! ! |
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