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Lost
Contributed by
eternal123
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Monday, 2nd February 2009 @ 03:56:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Tell me what it's like to be loved,
to be cared for in such a delicate and pure way...
When you lean on me, I slip into a new world,
a world of care and prospect.
Vibrant colours splash and perfect the blank canvas
they fluoresce with streaks of hope and promise...
Tell me what you feel,
do you share any such promise?
do you care for me?
Your ambiguity drags me under,
I feel neglected and confused.
Is this how you play your game?
I don't follow the rules, I want to stay clear
I want to forget you...
Tell me your true desire,
help me cease this suffering,
set me free...
Copyright ©
eternal123
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2009-02-02 15:56:37]
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Re: Lost
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd February 2009 @ 05:07:40 PM AEST
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a fluid, interesting poem. good work.
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Re: Lost
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by elle on
Monday, 2nd February 2009 @ 08:03:19 PM AEST
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pure & splendid in your fusing of the delicate feelings of love & hope with a longing to be
free of the absence of a true & telling response. peace. elle |
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