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One Soldiers Thoughts
Contributed by
InfamousG
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Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 01:25:00 AM in AEST
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The fine sand blows heavily upon my face
I feel it grind within my teeth as I bite
A memory resides of my love's warm embrace
Can almost hear the laughter of my kids' delight
The sun's bright light covers the furthest horizon
Blinding my vision and slowly roasting my flesh
Her beauty is but a dream for me to lay my eyes on
She is my strength but what ends the pain in my chest
With my love for humanity the reason I'm here is clear
But I can't help but ask why as my body becomes cold
The sight of my blood upon the sand gives me no fear
But to say goodbye would be worth more than any gold
I cling to my chest as everything around becomes dark
I try to hold my last breath and wonder about my life
Random images in my head, I wonder where I'll embark
As my final breath escapes the last picture is my wife
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Re: One Soldiers Thoughts
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 07:50:09 AM AEST
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| AAHHH So very touching! I hope & pray you will come home soon to your family! We support you guys! Christina |
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Re: One Soldiers Thoughts
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 08:10:38 AM AEST
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| Awesome poem ... please take care ... always enjoy your poetry... Jan |
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Re: One Soldiers Thoughts
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Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 08:14:44 AM AEST
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| Thanks, it really feels good to hear you say that. |
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Re: One Soldiers Thoughts
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by InfamousG on
Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 08:17:24 AM AEST
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| Thanks, I should be posting more soon I just need to take the time to type them out. |
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Re: One Soldiers Thoughts
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 09:17:37 AM AEST
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Beautiful write InfamousG...so sad
Stay safe and God Bless
from a neighbor in the north
*Dani* |
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Re: One Soldiers Thoughts
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by InfamousG on
Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 10:01:17 AM AEST
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| Thank you, for your support. |
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Re: One Soldiers Thoughts
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by Varro on
Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 02:27:26 PM AEST
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A wonderful soldier's poem. Very gritty and touching as well. I feel I'm in harm's way with you, walking beside you through the burning desert. Sobering poem. Very poignant. I thank all our soldiers for their bravery, professionalism and skill. God bless you.
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Re: One Soldiers Thoughts
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by InfamousG on
Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 02:33:09 PM AEST
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| I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the support. |
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Re: One Soldiers Thoughts
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by shelby on
Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 08:31:22 PM AEST
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This is beautiful!! Thankyou for sharing it. God Bless You!! God Bless America!! USA USA USA
all the way. I am behind you and pray for all of you each day!!COme home safe to us!!
Michelle |
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Re: One Soldiers Thoughts
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by Tanna on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 08:02:40 AM AEST
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| Keep your family close to your heart, as you are in theirs. God Bless you .... the country stands behind you. Stay safe. |
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Re: One Soldiers Thoughts
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by InfamousG on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 09:19:59 AM AEST
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| Thanks, I appreciate your support and I speak for all of us here saying it really does mean something. Thank you |
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Re: One Soldiers Thoughts
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by InfamousG on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 09:24:18 AM AEST
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| Thanks and I will. Thank you for your support. |
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