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colour Hunter
Contributed by
fortunesdancer
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Sunday, 1st February 2009 @ 07:55:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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i see you demon
emerging from the smog
unsure whether your a cat or a dog
but your there
i stare and you stare back
you have a black heart
a running dart
gleaming eyes a green flash
swift lunge in a dash
agile feet
my eyes burn in tropic heat
prepare for the kill
perfectly still
predatory pouncer
adept agile assasin
black is this hunter scared are its prey
green are its eyes watching the day
red are its paws after the feast
leaps shattering yellow suns gaze
patrols at night under moons white haze
lost amongst pink orange purple forest daze
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2009-02-01 07:55:20]
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Re: colour Hunter
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by desireemiote on
Sunday, 1st February 2009 @ 04:06:44 PM AEST
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| yeah if that was a lucid dream I'm sure it would just about give anyone a heart attack |
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Re: colour Hunter
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd February 2009 @ 04:31:34 PM AEST
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nice writing, i liked it, very vivid.
-phil |
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