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rigor mortis
Contributed by
elle
on
Saturday, 31st January 2009 @ 08:03:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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the dew,
is my friend.
settles in. . .
as I lay morning side
of tumultuous thoughts,
tumbling.
the field
is clear.
the air crisp,
settles in. . .
this quietest of time.
my path, not clear.
not yet.
nowhere in sight.
what?
no hand to hold.
the dull thud of loneliness
falls heavy.
realization,
as it is,
is my friend.
settles in. . .
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2009-01-31 20:03:05]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: rigor mortis
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 31st January 2009 @ 09:41:45 PM AEST
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| Your poetry is so genuine...so real! |
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Re: rigor mortis
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by emystar on
Saturday, 31st January 2009 @ 10:33:22 PM AEST
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Sad but increible writing.
Luv the title.
Huggs, smiles, blessings,
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Re: rigor mortis
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by fanniesson on
Monday, 2nd February 2009 @ 06:40:24 PM AEST
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nice piece here
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Re: rigor mortis
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by Spike on
Sunday, 1st March 2009 @ 04:32:13 AM AEST
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elle, that morning clarity, post escapist sleep is only rivalled by that time in the afternoon described by author Douglas Adams as 'the long dark teatime of the soul.'
a spare and sobering write. I don't enjoy that thud either, but its better than waking up alongside someone you don't want to be near.
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Re: rigor mortis
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by ShaonKra on
Wednesday, 4th March 2009 @ 08:07:24 AM AEST
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Good, like the flow of it
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