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There Was a Door..
Contributed by
dilrubay
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Saturday, 31st January 2009 @ 11:46:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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There Was a Door..
thinking of Thou, where Thou might be
remembering Thou, so Thou remember Me
ah!this life, so short, why it must end?
i want Thou to remember,
remembering Thou and Me..
the Door to which Thou found no key
the Veil through which I could not see
alas!they talked of Thou and Me
for a while, then they remembered no talks
of Me and Thee..
**^*^..
dilrubay
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dilrubay
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2009-01-31 11:46:12]
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Re: There Was a Door..
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by khan on
Saturday, 31st January 2009 @ 12:48:54 PM AEST
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| Beautiful, lucky friend of yours ... |
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Re: There Was a Door..
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 31st January 2009 @ 07:00:17 PM AEST
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a beautiful small write. it reminded me a little of rumi, it's that elaborate style that i associate with arabia anyway. very very nice.
-phil |
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Re: There Was a Door..
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by shuronjona on
Sunday, 1st February 2009 @ 11:32:34 AM AEST
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very sweet..... dolonchampa, i like this poem.
thanx my dear friend.... |
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