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i wish

Contributed by fortunesdancer on Saturday, 31st January 2009 @ 05:24:33 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

i wish i could have been there
seen the light leave your eyes
maybe be your hero and save you from your lies
you told yourself
i wish i could have seen your stare
we all loved you but you didnt care
you didnt have her
it wasn't fair
hopeless i see you
futile i reach
but you were no longer there
lingering on the edge
a single tear on your face
no longer longing for this world
happily i knew you
happily you shall go
we found you on a friday
your favourite day
a trickling stream of blooddrops
like tears flowed from you carresing your feature
a single wound undisputible cause of death
a lifeless shell near the end you lived
not happy
nor sad
nor freind or foe
in a way im glad you gave up
denied yourself to carry on
you were waiting in the shade for me
waiting to be found
in our secret place
no one heard the gunshot silent not a sound no one was around
cruely fate taunted you
cruely you lived
peacfully you died
but still i longed to be at your side

Copyright © fortunesdancer ... [ 2009-01-31 05:24:33]
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Re: i wish (User Rating: 1 )
by musicrox13 on Saturday, 9th May 2009 @ 07:29:11 PM AEST
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that was awsome very deep

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