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I had a dream today
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
on
Thursday, 29th January 2009 @ 10:12:02 PM in AEST
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I had a dream today
That I would just fade away
Cease to be
But somehow I was still around to see
Everything was in my sight
but I''m still not there
I could plainly see
no one cared
People wouldn't even miss me
even if I ceased to be
But little did the know
that I could still see
that not one person cared
to show compassion to me
This whole world has begun to rot
And I noticed the people are rotting to
All as I notice how easily I was forgot
Copyright ©
Voice of the Silent
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2009-01-29 22:12:02]
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Re: I had a dream today
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by emystar on
Thursday, 29th January 2009 @ 10:40:49 PM AEST
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Aw this is very sad but well written.
We would miss you.
Hang tuff.
Big huggs, luv, blessings,
emy |
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Re: I had a dream today
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 29th January 2009 @ 11:39:53 PM AEST
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yes really sad,,, anyway i like it very much
cheers
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Re: I had a dream today
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by Voice of the Silent on
Tuesday, 3rd February 2009 @ 11:04:15 PM AEST
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I hate to do this but I want to add this to my poem
as a new stanza
What if my dream where to come true
Would you miss me
even if I could still see you |
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