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Realization
Contributed by
infinitepoet
on
Wednesday, 28th January 2009 @ 05:44:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Like A brick
it struck me,
stuck me
with the truth,
in my youth I
would've ignored
such A sign,
Now I find
it's best to
Heed,
Proceed with
Caution & Care
Beware,
the writing on
the wall,
How could you
Fall
Out of Love?
But you did it!
Now forget it~.......
You wont take
me back
that's A fact...
And I wandered
in Pain,
Almost Insane
wondering
where I went
wrong,
When all along
it was nothing
I could of
prevented,
you invented
Excuses to
Accuse & Abuse
me,
So you see
we can't be
together anymore....,
because I
Adore you to
much and
your such A
Manic Depressant
that you can't
handle all my
Love,
you shove and
push me away
you can't stay
in the light of
my Affection
for you
Perfection
would be if I
treated you
like Dirt,
Then you'd have
A reason to feel
Hurt,
to justify your
self pity,
but in
Reality
you were just
looking for
an excuse
to accuse me
of
things
up
"Why don't you
just
Shut Up!!"
You need help
and I cannot
give it if I
could I would
give it,
but you won't
swallow the
pill
of facing
what's real...................
by:PepperMint Ki$$e$
2006~07
I can't believe I lost the ending to thi one
Shucks!
Copyright ©
infinitepoet
... [
2009-01-28 17:44:00]
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Re: Realization
(User Rating: 1 )
by ek_da_poet on
Wednesday, 28th January 2009 @ 10:21:17 PM AEST
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| it was good but i really disliked the format of how you wrorte this piece, im assuming this is your struggle. it will get good |
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Re: Realization
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th April 2009 @ 02:54:34 PM AEST
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i liked the format, i think it worked effectively.
-Phil |
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