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Miss You
Contributed by
flygirl90
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Wednesday, 28th January 2009 @ 03:46:31 PM in AEST
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I miss how you called me "your doll",
I miss the way you used to hug me.
I miss just having you there.
I went to see you the other day,
but you didn't know who I was.
It hurts not knowing if you're ok or not.
It just hurts..
I miss your smell,
a mixture of tabacco and peppermint.
I miss just having you there.
It's not ok to forget me,
'cause I haven't forgotten about you.
I never will.
I miss just having you there.
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2009-01-28 15:46:31]
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Re: Miss You
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 28th January 2009 @ 05:21:02 PM AEST
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Very touching and sad.. I don't think she will totally forget you tho..... Hang in there..and keep the faith..
Jenni |
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Re: Miss You
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th January 2009 @ 11:41:22 PM AEST
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So close to me.... i like it very much
Cheers |
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Re: Miss You
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by kismetkills on
Thursday, 29th January 2009 @ 09:44:37 PM AEST
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| beautifully written, and it's very sad, what you have to live with. it sounds like she has alzheimer's from what you wrote. it must be very difficult for you, but at least you still have all the happy memories, and even when it seems like she's not really there, she'll always be carried on with you. |
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Re: Miss You
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by HonestInk on
Saturday, 31st January 2009 @ 03:56:21 PM AEST
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| Nice poem. I've been there recently, it's too familiar. Keep writing, it helps. |
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