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A Poison
Contributed by
Lady_Daisy
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Monday, 26th January 2009 @ 10:01:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Dispassionate and childish minds
fuelled by a poison of deliverance
she still pursues it
it pursues her
lusting after each other
she says enough, and sips it
so tragic yet so good.
She's in her own angelic place now,
careless as there is no place to fall
she’ll awake feeling as she did before.
Now it’s never ending dispassionate and childish minds
Only this time fuelled by existence of pursing the end
Sensing it as it arrives
Seeing it as it nears
Tasting it as it nears,
Hoping for it to hasten its pace.
Copyright ©
Lady_Daisy
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2009-01-26 22:01:36]
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Re: A Poison
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by eeeitak on
Monday, 26th January 2009 @ 11:04:56 PM AEST
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| oh this is dark, but incredible. very powerful! |
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Re: A Poison
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 27th January 2009 @ 12:36:45 AM AEST
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really good i like it very much
cheers
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Re: A Poison
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 27th January 2009 @ 01:49:04 AM AEST
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Yes I agree very dark but something we can get so involved in. Great write.
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Re: A Poison
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by Spike on
Tuesday, 27th January 2009 @ 03:19:18 AM AEST
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Finally - a poem tonight that works on every level - technique, subject, rhyme and metre - and correct bloody spelling! Well done.
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