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passion. . .
Contributed by
elle
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Sunday, 25th January 2009 @ 10:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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passion. . .
trueness of being.
the direction of the soul.
timing.
somewhere, someone
melts in pleasure. . .
the multi-layers
of device
peeled slowly away
by innocence & desire.
concealed in a sigh,
the moment of
anticipation. . .
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2009-01-25 22:40:00]
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Re: passion. . .
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th January 2009 @ 01:24:29 AM AEST
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| And again!!!! So much said in such a short poem. Impressive. |
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Re: passion. . .
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th January 2009 @ 02:02:24 AM AEST
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Wow.... somewhere, someone
melts in pleasure my favorite line but the entire poem is excellent.
I've noticed that you posted this under abstract. Okay, but it could be interpreted soooo many different ways and I found it far from abstract but that's me. I have quite often been called weird. :-)
Take care,
Tim
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