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so be it. . .
Contributed by
elle
on
Sunday, 25th January 2009 @ 09:58:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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exhilaration over & over
& trickling amen softly,
rolls with sweet intent. . . on. . . on. . .
&. . . on. . . lost. . . as it unfolds itself.
lost so completely within a whisper.
a tiny wand.
tiny. rare. taboo?
the shadow cast?
shadow of every shadow,
rare, exquisite.
unfurles itself
to be as waves
of your dusk-petal vision
rising,
rippling
waves inside of waves.
encapsilating profound, jagged ground.
the sphere of self awareness,
sight to free us of ourselves.
the sound of morning birds' soft cawing,
fragrant dewdrop mist surrounds.
the sprout, springing
a humbling.
ego gambles certainty. . .
so suspend it.
unabiding. unhinged. undone.
levy with your peace glance. . .
abiding. unabridged . well done.
strobing. . . unbridled residue
of a sweeter sunset.
amen.
floating. spun.
hindering my attempt to
withdraw & leave.
I did not bare understand,
the coveted lot. . .
through pledge of tears.
reckless confidante.
belladonna pedestal,
singed by trapeze flame.
door ajar. . . no lock.
beloved black nowhere
becomes a wiggle.
cavort with care. . . shhhhh. . .
my trappings, they are listening.
what else to bare?
what else to bare??
whhiiisssspppeer. . .
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2009-01-25 21:58:14]
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Re: so be it. . .
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by eeeitak on
Sunday, 25th January 2009 @ 10:37:06 PM AEST
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wow! this is so creative, so original.
great write, friend :D |
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Re: so be it. . .
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by eternalsunshine on
Sunday, 25th January 2009 @ 10:48:59 PM AEST
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wow
no words other than -enjoy your journey and keep up your great work...:)
Love |
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Re: so be it. . .
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 26th January 2009 @ 02:10:20 AM AEST
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| I don't know how you do it but it was as if I could hear this as I read. This comment just doesn't do the poem justice as I am somewhat speechless. |
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