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Wishes
Contributed by
eeeitak
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Sunday, 25th January 2009 @ 08:57:35 PM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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Wishes Wishes Desires Wishes
When do we stop dreaming?
When do we stop believing?
When do we give up on our
Wishes Wishes Desires Wishes
And what if I don't?
What if I don't?
What happens then?
Rejection Rejection Failure Rejection
When does it all become too much?
When do we surrender?
When do we lose ourselves to
Rejection Rejection Failure Rejection
And what if I don't?
What if I don't?
I won't
I won't.
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eeeitak
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2009-01-25 20:57:35]
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Re: Wishes
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by elle on
Sunday, 25th January 2009 @ 10:04:51 PM AEST
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| I really liked this write. spunky & tough. elle |
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Re: Wishes
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by myheartsvoice on
Monday, 26th January 2009 @ 11:16:22 PM AEST
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Welcome back, and this is beautiful,
i love the flow and the concept of how
it drew me in with interest, questioning
destiny, and the tanacity of not accepting
defeat , as stated in the last line, lovely
writting indeed . . .
thank you like wise for your
read, and comment, take care . . .
Ben
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Re: Wishes
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th January 2009 @ 06:17:07 PM AEST
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Very nicely done. I like the sentiment about not giving up. I am sure many of us have had these thoughts and questions. I know I can relate.
Thank you for an enjoyable read.
Take care,
Tim |
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