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An Escape from the Kingdom of Perish
Contributed by
beefybeebuzz
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Sunday, 25th January 2009 @ 08:25:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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What is this flame that we must feed?
A faithful stallion, a noble steed?
No no! this curse of men that're crazing
Never hungry, always grazing.
Just before Grim's spell is cast,
We take a look upon our past.
Where we notice, that our lives wither.
And farther still, those snakes do slither.
To the land of my Divine!
Take this gem up to that shrine!
And wish with haste my eyes be shut,
My heart stop beating, my string be cut.
OH Fates! Do ring that irrevocable chime.
And lay me to rest until the end of time.......
-END-
"People eventually believe their own lies,
and when they believe, we believe, and when
we believe, where is the truth?" -Me
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Re: An Escape from the Kingdom of Perish
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by shelby on
Sunday, 25th January 2009 @ 10:57:53 PM AEST
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Enjoyed this write and the little note you left at the end.
I cannot put my finger on what this reminds me of, guess I am to tired but it reminds me of something.
Again I loved the post.
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Re: An Escape from the Kingdom of Perish
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd March 2009 @ 01:37:44 AM AEST
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Very good. I can feel the emotion and that ending quote there.... yeah, what you said, "me" !!! :-)
Take care,
Tim |
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