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Mirron Mirror
Contributed by
lightspeedlucyx
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Sunday, 25th January 2009 @ 10:16:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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mirror mirror on the wall
who am i today?
am i the person i used to know,
or am i the one i hate?
i layer on the war paint,
try and hide the pain,
no ones seen my other side,
i dont want them to today
its to soon for them to find out
I'm not the person they used to know
im a completely differnt person
with a completley differnt soul
im not all rainbows and butterflies
and dont fight and peace and light
im a whole lot different than what i was yesterday
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2009-01-25 10:16:22]
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Re: Mirron Mirror
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th January 2009 @ 02:05:41 PM AEST
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a very deep, passionate write. i particularly liked this bit:
i layer on the war paint,
try and hide the pain,
very clever. good writing.
-phil |
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Re: Mirron Mirror
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by crow6279 on
Tuesday, 24th February 2009 @ 06:28:35 PM AEST
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| Nice write. Thanks for sharing. |
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