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Sweet Lie
Contributed by
lyss
on
Saturday, 24th January 2009 @ 09:30:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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tell me again how you love me
oh how i love a sweet lie
i hold on to those words lightly
but ill never tell them goodbye
hesitation i have when you lean in
theres no emotion behind that face
but i meet your lips once again
the tension between us leaves a trace
tell me again how you love me
oh how i love a sweet lie
i hold on to those words lightly
but ill never tell them goodbye
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lyss
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2009-01-24 21:30:25]
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Re: Sweet Lie
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th January 2009 @ 08:17:59 AM AEST
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beautifully tragic, a passionate write.
-phil |
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Re: Sweet Lie
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by deegarcia on
Sunday, 25th January 2009 @ 02:56:34 PM AEST
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| i like dis poem :) i can relate |
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Re: Sweet Lie
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by brokenwings on
Monday, 26th January 2009 @ 12:36:10 AM AEST
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| It was a very good write, kinda sad but well put. I really love this poem, sometimes its the sweetness we love not the lie |
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