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Now and Forever
Contributed by
xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx
on
Saturday, 24th January 2009 @ 09:02:27 PM in AEST
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Thy skin so pale, eyes of icey blue, hair raven black
Daunting look yet so frail, dark but scaring me not
This beauty inmortalized by a man like thy
Close to thy I feel safe, in thy arms even more
Thy eyes piercing thru me soul, the passion reins
Searching thru me veins for the drink inside
Fresh blood is thy addiction, the power for survival
I offer thy me neck, will the blood be harvested?
Thy scorching presence makes me body shiver
Ravenous and quick, drink me blood I bid thy
The red flowing from me veins, a marker upon
An eternal sign of lust, thy bite is leaving me
Me body lavenous laying in thy arms
The fresh redness still on thy lips
Still, souless, empty look upon me eyes
With glazed eye, I see thy, for the man thy are
An inmortal life by thy side in stride for lust
I am yours passionately, a guidance I seek
Breed me well master, for I'm to keep by thy,
I long for thy, and a life beside thy, now and forever.
~~ Nats ~~
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Re: Now and Forever
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by simsalabim on
Saturday, 24th January 2009 @ 09:57:26 PM AEST
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i am weekend by thee my little flower.. i misspelled "weakened"
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Re: Now and Forever
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th January 2009 @ 10:06:09 PM AEST
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Yep, it'd definitely be forever with what appears to be a vampyre!!! Very nice, Nats. I enjoyed it immensely!!!! I am glad to see you are back and posting.
Take care,
Tim
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Re: Now and Forever
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th January 2009 @ 08:20:57 AM AEST
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very nice. it had a little bit of everything. i loved the old-fashioned style, it worked very well. all in all, good work.
-phil |
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Re: Now and Forever
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Wednesday, 27th May 2009 @ 05:54:36 AM AEST
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Definitely in the gothic genre I think.
Dark and brooding in a classic way
Well done
Steve |
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