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You Save Me
Contributed by
midnightsky
on
Wednesday, 31st July 2002 @ 06:28:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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a vacancy overlooked
desperately longing for Your touch.
a smile to hide the pain
this has all become too much.
a shudder, a wince
creeps on me in my truth.
a quiet cry escapes my mouth,
as time ticks by
so does my youth.
creating a bed of thorns to lie in
i ask myself why.
when my own sharp points punch right through me,
its something i can't deny.
too tired to speak
too angry to hear
too afraid to move
i'm stuck in fear.
my cry becomes Your call
speaking of refuge, grace and peace
and once again with my head held low,
You save me.
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midnightsky
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2002-07-31 06:28:56]
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Re: You Save Me
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by Chrissie on
Wednesday, 31st July 2002 @ 06:53:15 AM AEST
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The sheer beauty of this has made me tearful. I can't praise it enough. Welcome to YPDC. I'm looking forward to reading more of your poetry.
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Re: You Save Me
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by Brooke on
Wednesday, 31st July 2002 @ 10:01:33 AM AEST
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This poem was so powerful, I had tears in my eyes. I to have had experiences like that. I also welcome you to YPDC, I am also new here and I hope you enjoy it as much as I have, and I hope I read more from you! This was a truely touching piece.
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Re: You Save Me
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 31st July 2002 @ 11:50:35 AM AEST
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A very touching and heartfelt poem. It couldn't come at a better time for me...... Thank you for sharing it.....Hope you like it here..
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