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the dragon of EVERYTHING
Contributed by
simsalabim
on
Saturday, 24th January 2009 @ 01:32:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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smiling
in defeat
the dragon inside
of us
is winning
what he gave
up
is wounded...
speared
through a center
spiralling
downwards
and through
the swirling clouds
below...
a maelstrom
of reticent
hate and lust
made from
this hate of
reticent
being...
Copyright ©
simsalabim
... [
2009-01-24 01:32:44]
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Re: the dragon of EVERYTHING
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by elle on
Saturday, 24th January 2009 @ 11:39:18 AM AEST
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| a most powerful sentiment. . . peace. elle. |
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Re: the dragon of EVERYTHING
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th January 2009 @ 09:08:18 AM AEST
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very fluent, very good.
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