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Suicidal Spirit
Contributed by
sbs
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Saturday, 24th January 2009 @ 12:25:15 AM in AEST
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Feeling of rejection, hurt and loss
Made anger is her own boss
Just caught in thinking, there's no way out
Being disappointed, the only thing she cares about
So bad to feel unloved, so hurt to be unwanted
As always her dreams, family try to avoid it
No one listen hear or care, always there's silence...
And when she does wrong, they meet her with violence
Bad when a human with talents hide behind the fears
Worse when there's always no one to wash your tears
Worst the sequences that focus on depression
The feeling of being ashamed to make your own decision
Except when your mind rash to the negative side
As this pretty teen rash to suicide....
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2009-01-24 00:25:15] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Suicidal Spirit
(User Rating: 1 ) by moumita on
Saturday, 24th January 2009 @ 07:39:18 PM AEST (User
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there are two tragedies in life ,
one is not to get your heart desire
and the other is to get it !
no reason to be dishearten .
nice one
keep it up aapu .. |
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Re: Suicidal Spirit
(User Rating: 1 ) by Voice of the Silent on
Saturday, 24th January 2009 @ 11:12:05 PM AEST (User
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Great write but no reason for suicide I've thought about it myself...but there's always something to listen to care you may think they don't care but some where someone will care and listen to your problems in life
I will if you want I'm always willing to help
hope you feel better soon
-Kelly |
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Re: Suicidal Spirit
(User Rating: 1 ) by elle on
Sunday, 25th January 2009 @ 02:18:43 PM AEST (User
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the paradox of life. . . one constant. . .
everything changes.
just breath. sit back. become aware.
fulfill your purpose, as individual & beautiful
as you surely are, inside & out.
don't say good-bye. be determined to live life
to the fullest. become excellent. . . kiss the sky.
we are never alone. peace. elle |
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