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departure
Contributed by
elle
on
Friday, 23rd January 2009 @ 10:09:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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keep me
if you can.
a pet, to ease
your loneliness.
& in your shadow
I will hide
all evidence
of a sun. . .
already set.
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2009-01-23 10:09:49]
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Re: departure
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 23rd January 2009 @ 04:30:15 PM AEST
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Geeze, that is sad! You really pack a lot of emotion into something so short.
Take care.
Thanks for sharing your soul and talent.
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Re: departure
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by lnnie on
Saturday, 24th January 2009 @ 04:08:14 PM AEST
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This is a true gem
Wonderful write.
I will hide all evidence of a sun already set.
Lovely
Liked "War" too, a lot.
What a great word-poem person you are!
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