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my first poem (death)

Contributed by jmt25607 on Friday, 23rd January 2009 @ 12:33:39 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



i wrote this when i was 12 so be nice...

I Don’t understand life
we come in to this world with eyes wide open unaware or dim witted , fact that everyone we love is going to die.
Only to live miserable little life’s full of death and hate
with only few joys, which are soon tooken away
and we are expected to be happy and full of glee
when our world is falling apart before our eyes
knowing any day that it will be our turn
when Our times up against father death and his blade of misery
and we are to hope and see everything before that day as wonderful..
This makes know since ..
If we our sad or hung over by this element of life , we our depressed
I feel am not depressed the rest of the world is just blind or ignorant to the hole fact that our life’s
Are nothing more then meaningless and misfortunate
if we are remember after death its by what 2 to 3 generations at most
And this is to make us happy
I know it irrevocable and it inevitable but why is it wrong to morn our life’s before its to late to morn?



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Re: my first poem (death) (User Rating: 1 )
by classicfailedhero on Saturday, 24th January 2009 @ 09:41:11 PM AEST
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imporessive- specialy for a first write- cheers




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