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Ancient and deserted seas.
Contributed by
iodinelove
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Friday, 23rd January 2009 @ 12:14:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Old friend,
Once again, my heart denies me the eternity of your grace, and I am tear-struck and smiling at the sounds of your song, singing beneath the influences of a sturdy rain.
In my thoughts, you are the thunder and the sun, the fast oncoming wave of an ancient and deserted sea, and you are the moonlight at the crown of an unfolding dawn, the stars of an absent sky.
In my dreams, our voices blend, and our fingers run parallel along the strings of our song, and our eyes find in one another the certainty of a cloudy day dispersing into the scarlet dews of dusk.
In the moment’s pause that my thoughts rest, your thoughts walk casually by, and as my dreams descend, your dreams lift and set to fly over ancient and deserted seas.
We grow older every day, our voices grow ever feeble, conquered by silence, laid waste by broken promises, and our hearts find love has fallen, undone by the very songs we sing.
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iodinelove
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2009-01-23 00:14:59]
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Re: Ancient and deserted seas.
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 23rd January 2009 @ 02:40:02 AM AEST
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Very, very bittersweet and melancholy. I like it a lot; the metaphor and imagery... very nice.
Thank you for an enjoyable read.
Take care,
Tim |
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Re: Ancient and deserted seas.
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by elle on
Friday, 23rd January 2009 @ 10:39:54 AM AEST
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| I love your poetry. . . simply breath-taking. peace. elle |
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Re: Ancient and deserted seas.
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by zenith66 on
Friday, 23rd January 2009 @ 09:07:02 PM AEST
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wow, now thats poetry, fabulous command of the human heartstrings my freind, you gave me this epic description and i loved every minute of it, wow the imagery just jumps off the page and then calms me with its very subltle majesty,
truly i dont normally like these types of poems but when written with such masterfull a mind as yours i am stunned, really loved this, reeks of queality and tells a toucing story my freind""
thanks for this on!! |
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