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Frozen in ice
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
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Thursday, 22nd January 2009 @ 09:10:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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A new write for me this one is new because it's not from my journal hope you like it. It's the first one I've wrote in awhile
I'm frozen in ice
Overlooking paradise
And it is torment
And I lament
To move and see
To be free
From the coldness of the ice
So I can bask in paradise
It's there right in my grasp
But it ends in pain
But I'll reach paradise if it's my last
I'll get to paradise before I go insane
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2009-01-22 21:10:13] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Frozen in ice
(User Rating: 1 ) by moir3241 on
Friday, 23rd January 2009 @ 04:16:15 PM AEST (User
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i'm glad you decided to write again, this was very good and i can relate. -moira |
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