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When I kissed you...
Contributed by
aaron8124
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Thursday, 22nd January 2009 @ 07:33:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Yesterday, I kissed you and I felt something. I felt love. When your lips touched mine I felt every part of you mingling inside of me. It was what the movie people call a firework kiss. What seemed to be ten minutes was probably only a few seconds. A kiss so soft, so heart felt, so passionate... I felt as though everyone was watching and could feel the love radiating from us. So innocent, yet so sensual at the same time. How can I stand here and not be moved by you? Simply put, I cannot. Every time I'm with you my heart jumps, I get warm to the touch...and it's simply because I'm falling in love with you.
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Re: When I kissed you...
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by EcuaOrgullo310 on
Thursday, 22nd January 2009 @ 08:43:15 PM AEST
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This is such a sweet write.
So heartfelt and loving.
so gentle.
brings a smile to the readers face. :) |
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Re: When I kissed you...
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by elle on
Friday, 23rd January 2009 @ 11:56:41 AM AEST
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| very nicely expressed. peace. elle |
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Re: When I kissed you...
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by DanaZombieSlayer on
Thursday, 21st February 2013 @ 06:44:05 PM AEST
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| That was the sweetest thing I've ever read, and also one of the best. I haven't read very many good love poems. You did an awesome job. |
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