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OAnother death poem (part 67)
Contributed by
fanniesson
on
Thursday, 22nd January 2009 @ 09:33:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The old man hit the floor,
got up three months later
mouth twisted
weekly therapy visits,
and a nurse maid to feed
and help him
on and off the toilet bowl.
So don’t think heart attack
the Cadillac of death.
Most suffer & are unmercifully
humiliated
those last year’s of their lives
waiting for death to end
their miserable existence.
Copyright ©
fanniesson
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2009-01-22 09:33:26]
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Re: OAnother death poem (part 67)
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by EcuaOrgullo310 on
Thursday, 22nd January 2009 @ 08:47:02 PM AEST
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sounds like things have been painful.
I'm sorry for whoever has suffered this.
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Re: OAnother death poem (part 67)
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by Voice of the Silent on
Thursday, 22nd January 2009 @ 09:13:25 PM AEST
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Diffferent but still a great write very creative but at the same time very dark
hope to read more soon
-kelly |
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Re: OAnother death poem (part 67)
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by elle on
Friday, 23rd January 2009 @ 03:13:47 PM AEST
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| it's so not what comes & goes. . . but how it leaves those effected. point taken. peace. elle |
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