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so serious...poem...
Contributed by
simsalabim
on
Thursday, 22nd January 2009 @ 03:26:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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work it out
to your
satisfaction
do an action
leave me be
get thee
some of that
fiddle dee dee
do run run
get a gun
i told you
how to have
your fun
make me
your
martyr
beat me
with your
sticks
cover me
with your
lies
make it alright
to spit
in my own hand
so it doesn't feel
like sand
ain't my life grand
creep through
infinity
steal my
identity
make off with everything
ridiculously
make fun of me
as i seriously try to
slap you
silly
fiddle dee dee
do run run
i lost mr gun
study the backside
of it all
laugh your stone
faces off
till your mistakes
are running scared
as hell
through my hall
get a hobby
harassment is
not a hobby
brutality is not
my forte
$$$
your life is sloppy
a malfunction
FBI or CIA
chief of police
it's your
party
i'll eat your garbage
like you
ate mine
Copyright ©
simsalabim
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2009-01-22 03:26:25]
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Re: so serious...poem...
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by fanniesson on
Thursday, 22nd January 2009 @ 09:38:35 AM AEST
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The lay out of the piece stanza wise was just perfect
making this an interesting and excellent
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Re: so serious...poem...
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by ItsMeNow on
Wednesday, 11th February 2009 @ 11:08:09 AM AEST
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| Wow this is a crazy poem. I don't fully understand it nonetheless I like it. |
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Re: so serious...poem...
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by ShaonKra on
Monday, 23rd February 2009 @ 04:10:39 AM AEST
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| What can I say, it's worthy of a black aspirin |
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Re: so serious...poem...
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by simsalabim on
Thursday, 26th February 2009 @ 11:52:10 PM AEST
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| thank you so much and you're worthy of a pink cigarette.. |
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