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- Dear God -

Contributed by 143 on Thursday, 22nd January 2009 @ 12:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

Dear God,
Ive given it a shot,
And so many times indeed...

Ive followed your rules
and used all my tools,
that youve handed down to me...

There are times when I pray at night
As I claps my hands,
and oh so tight...

That I wonder in style
to be unique,
I love you God, Im at your feet...

But do you hear, Im sure you do,
Sometimes your faith
always pulls me through...

I know Ive done wrong
and Ive sinned allot,
But its something I did , not always plot...

So is it ok
to forgive me again,
Ive seemed to repeat, all of my sins...

Im sorry O' Lord
I know Ive done so wrong,
Will you heal me, and make me strong...

For I am burdened
Im tired and weary,
please take this weight, that I surely carry...

I know Im young ,but feel so old,
so will you grant me
some energy in bold...

For if you do, Ill carry myself on,
and take my tools
and build again strong

Will you bless my house
where I belong,
thats where I pray, and all day long...

So heres our deal
to you as I stand, Ill wait for your,
heavenly plan...

And with that said, please remember me,
is she out there,
or should I search and see...

Ill keep my faith true and loud,
they can take my all
even my house...

In the end if I have nothing,
Ill have it all,
if I have something...

And what that is
that were an achiever,
I trust in you Lord, because Im a believer...

Copyright © 143 ... [ 2009-01-22 00:40:00]
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Re: - Dear God - (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 22nd January 2009 @ 04:01:58 AM AEST
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Very moving, powerful, dynomite write!
Awesome.
Huggs, blessings, smiles,
emy

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