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Contributed by owkenny on Wednesday, 21st January 2009 @ 11:28:03 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I always said i loved you more than life itself
now you put yourself through pain's strife and it's hell
but i am far to honorable to go against my word
so i guess you'll drag me down as well

You gave up with your life so i asked you to try again
i dunno if anyone else cares but Im still your friend
i know of a few more who love you
we can take your problems and create amends

Im not letting you ruin your life alone
you gave up but i still see that fighting tone
you have many trials
but each is just a great chance to become grown

All i plea is that you try a little harder
just get on your feet and ill push you farther
i know you are capable of it
your life is potentially so great and something i want to be apart of

we've had our difference and said goodbye
Ive called you names and made you cry
youve hurt me badly also
but we have been able to put our difference aside

but now youre becoming the opposite of my type of people
you choose to take it easier and make yourself feeble
you see me as so much better and happier
when really you are my opposite equal

youre the drug i cant quit
the one person i love enough to admit
i cant get the upperhand on you
and now you pull this stint

this X on my hand tells me 'dont be a hippocrate'
but you advocate its meanings' opposite
and i love you enough to follow you to hell
what scares me is i know this

It would kill me to see you turn belittle youself like that
you instill ideas in your head and make them fact
just open your eyes and look
do that and i promise I'll be there looking back

I told you i love you more than anything, even you
I also have so much to lose
but if it means giving it all up to help,
I love you more than life, now I'll get to show proof

Copyright © owkenny ... [ 2009-01-21 23:28:03]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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