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PERFECT HEAVEN
Contributed by
wellsmark
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Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 07:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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PERFECT HEAVEN
I feel graceless without my love,
I left her today on the train.
Countless miles I travel adoring,
My cheeks crimson with pain.
I conjure up her grin,
Enjoying endless sparkling eyes.
Lips that could buckle knees,
Our concept was one for awhile.
Tracks carried my heartbeat,
Caressed by the Cathedral bells.
Wonderful scenery just compensates,
The yearning we share so well.
Distance may be a hurdle,
But union is latched within.
So near to model heaven,
Natural belle not out of a tin.
Copyright ©
wellsmark
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2003-03-22 19:45:00]
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Re: PERFECT HEAVEN
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 07:56:21 PM AEST
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| Beautifully written ... exquisite... |
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Re: PERFECT HEAVEN
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 10:50:25 PM AEST
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Simply heaven!!!!!
Angel always... Godspeed! |
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Re: PERFECT HEAVEN
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by XXXsilvervoodooXXX on
Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 11:40:35 PM AEST
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| very beautiful |
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Re: PERFECT HEAVEN
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 12:59:09 PM AEST
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| i love this:) |
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