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That boy
Contributed by
Puppy
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Tuesday, 20th January 2009 @ 07:10:55 AM in AEST
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Your eyes glistened as you spoke,
I could hear that lump form in your throat,
We had to say the things we said,
Otherwise our friendship would be dead,
We thought long and hard about what we had to say,
Yet we couldn't really remember one word at the end of the day,
We spoke from the heart,
Which is the best part,
You were kind and spoke the truth,
We got caught up in things because of our youth,
We thought from our hearts instead of our heads,
Never thought of the future of which we would later dread,
It could have been a bad situation,
Luckily you didn't throw the candlestick in your frustration,
We said our thank-you's and our sorry's,
We took our time and didn't hurry,
Things are now good all round,
We have finally found that middle ground,
As you said "There is a fine line between love and friendship",
And as you can guess I am sure glad we found it.
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Re: That boy
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by EcuaOrgullo310 on
Wednesday, 21st January 2009 @ 06:55:25 PM AEST
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| I liked it. It's a little wordy in some places, but I love the candlestick line. It made me giggle. :) |
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Re: That boy
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 17th April 2009 @ 09:59:02 AM AEST
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| its got a perfect rythem-sorry cant spell today!! |
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