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ana
Contributed by
lostforgood
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Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 07:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Here I stand,
A foreigner to this land.
I look down at my hands,
They are rougher than the sand.
Past my hands is my tummy,
I must quit eating things that are yummy.
Under my tummy I see my legs,
Yep, there are those huge thunder thighs.
My arms are chubby,
And they tend to bug me.
Why must I be so f***** ugly...
I can't stand to eat anymore,
Each bite I take will add more gore.
I jiggle and bounce with every step,
It's so disgusting that I just wept.
Everyone tries to say,
That I'm skinny as can be.
But these are lies; for I do not see,
This skinny side they find in me.
I'm fat, I'm gross, why don't they get it?
This is why I can not stand it,
Good bye food, hello ana.
It's about time you found me again
I have been waiting for you my friend
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Re: ana
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 08:58:38 AM AEST
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| Good on you - you go girl! Best of luck. Good poem. |
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Re: ana
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by tease_whizz on
Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 12:00:57 PM AEST
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| um, i think the person above misunderstood this poem (!). good luck with your struggle - you can beat this, i'm living proof. its the hardest thing to do to see yourself as beautiful - i hope you can soon. keep writing, Kate x |
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Re: ana
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 07:33:21 PM AEST
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| To tease_whizz ... No I didn't misunderstand this poem ... I realised her pain, but I believe the last two lines implied that she was finally finding some courage to turn things around and I was offering my encouragement to her, that's all. I didn't mean any offense, and thought this was a great poem. Perhaps I interpreted her final words in a different way to you. I'm sorry... Jan |
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Re: ana
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 06:46:57 AM AEST
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Try to remember that the person that counts is the person within the body. It shouldn't matter if you are a size 8 or a size 30!
I hope you can find peace and contentment with your body but don't forget that you are already beautiful
sleepless_siren |
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Re: ana
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by tinka_belle on
Saturday, 28th June 2003 @ 02:47:56 AM AEST
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ana is ur friend
she's always been mine
she's the bestest friend of all
though she might hurt u sometimes
food is satan
food is satan
ana i perfect
ana is good
ana is right
and dont let any one tell u otherwise
because the people who tell u
that she is wrong
just dint understand
becuase ana isnt their friend
they're too weak for her
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