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From The Darkness
Contributed by
xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx
on
Sunday, 18th January 2009 @ 07:04:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Heart pounding
Air too thick
So hard to breathe
Drowning skin
Is this how it feels?
Life bailing out
Numb body
Just a stare
Ground ripped away
From underneath me
Falling down
Catch me, I’m falling fast
Light inviting me in
A loud beep
Shimmers in the dark
A voice speaking
Heart pounding
Is this the end?
Bright light
I’m coming near
But me time
Is not yet arrived
Revive me
From the darkness
~~ Nats ~~
Copyright ©
xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx
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2009-01-18 19:04:57]
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Re: From The Darkness
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st January 2009 @ 07:25:05 PM AEST
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Aw, Nats, that's sad. I did not know you had a heart attack. This kind of comes from two places, the sadness (and fear) of possibly losing your life but happiness that you made it through. I am happy you made it through.
This did bring a tear to my eye and the stanzas about the light that really made me relate to a time I almost drowned...I remember seeing a light as I sank to the bottom .. then I woke up to people all around me after I was revived. I don't remember it all but I do rememebr fear, panic, a light and a sort of peace.
Again, I am glad you are still among us. The kiddies need their Mom!!!
Take care...really, take care of yourself.
Tim
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Re: From The Darkness
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 24th January 2009 @ 07:09:09 PM AEST
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Your time is far from spent in this realm.
I'm sure it is a very frightening experience and difficult to put into words, yet you did manage just that here.
Glad that you are still around my friend
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