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A Princess and the Stranger
Contributed by
khan
on
Sunday, 18th January 2009 @ 02:05:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Deep,
black eyes
unfamiliar,
yet known eyes
lost, in the air
gazing ..
tranquil, clear
shining, smiling
and so bright,
whispered 'O’stranger!
her words
heard no ear..
'O' stranger,
come and see
do you see what i see?
rainbow dances
around me
flying doves
surround me
dewdrops fall
how longingly
to kiss,
and embrace,
with warmth,
my cheeks, lips,
and this face..
The whirling breeze
my locks it
ruffles ..
in loving, softness
nature speaks,
my heavenliness,
it celebrates..
But stranger,
confess
you may
what brings you
here today?'
Her eyes still lost
in the air..
was it hope, or despair?
twinkling eyes,
too concealing
for stranger to look
and, hard to
forbear
to have a glance,
and be seen..
but, he towards her
moved closer..
and murmured
'O'Princess
this i know
what you whisper
is very unique
what you see
is even rare
i, thus feel
most mundane
to follow an obvious
path ordained
i can't see
what you see
but,
what i see
you can't admire
i see you
and these eyes ...
Copyright ©
khan
... [
2009-01-18 14:05:10]
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Re: A Princess and the Stranger
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by shelby on
Sunday, 18th January 2009 @ 05:39:15 PM AEST
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You took us along on a wonderful story here.
Lovely poem.
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Re: A Princess and the Stranger
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by dilrubay on
Tuesday, 20th January 2009 @ 03:08:58 AM AEST
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imageries
you painted
surrounds one
in a magical spell
there's an
element
of fairytalish
innocence
a touch of
the sublime
yet earthly..
one is
transcended
from reality
to beyond
in another
space
another
time..
..
may your muse
always
inspire
you..
**^*^..
Dilrubay |
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Re: A Princess and the Stranger
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by shuronjona on
Sunday, 1st February 2009 @ 11:46:27 AM AEST
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| very lovely and sweet poem. |
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