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Untamed dreams
Contributed by
kaylakristine
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Sunday, 18th January 2009 @ 10:36:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Why is it so important to fit in?
As if to survive everyone has to be made of tin.
Why is it such a sinfull deed,
When someone pulls out of the crowd and attemps to succeed?
People in this world are so simple minded;
Without caring if how thier fate will be unwinded.
There thoughts are shallow, tamed, and mild.
The crowd mocks me by screaming, "How dare you let your dreams run wild!"
Who are they to judge the life i lead?
When it is my mind who is strong and freed?
To be an individual I am so well releived!
Do they not have any other aspirations or desires?
Besides living and oblivious internal fire?
They're in denial about themselves so they criticize others;
And by doing so there very being is ugly and smothered.
Im not perfect and will never pretend to be;
But at the very least I can just be me:
Resolute, independant and free.
By Kayla Sorrells
Copyright ©
kaylakristine
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2009-01-18 10:36:30]
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Re: Untamed dreams
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by Boomvader on
Thursday, 4th July 2013 @ 05:43:39 PM AEST
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| Great write, indeed why try to fit in, when you can be far better at being you. |
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Re: Untamed dreams
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by tawakwan on
Monday, 8th July 2013 @ 01:22:59 PM AEST
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| Please. You must edit this poem. It has good content,but is poorly written. |
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