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Winter Seed
Contributed by
Spike
on
Friday, 16th January 2009 @ 06:56:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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We were virgins in our time;
green to the core and fumbling
in the blind way of youth towards
an act of fearful enticement.
And when I managed to
slip loose the confines of cloth
and gaze in raw description
at the curves and folds of mystery,
I felt blessed. Truly blessed.
We joined in such sweet union
to make angels weep and
the Devil sigh in jealousy;
to promulgate lust
and sate desires, only
to stain the moment and
conceive a child before time.
She went alone, to a room
of white sheets and cold steel
in the company of guilt,
to return scoured of our mistake.
I held her in my arms as
she consoled me.
we made love as the smell of ether
entwined with our breath and sex,
and I cried as she bled again.
Copyright ©
Spike
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2009-01-16 18:56:47]
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Re: Winter Seed
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th January 2009 @ 07:17:20 PM AEST
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a very passionate write.
-Phil |
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Re: Winter Seed
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th January 2009 @ 10:40:47 PM AEST
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very impressive....
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Re: Winter Seed
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 18th January 2009 @ 02:14:23 AM AEST
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Man, you twist it all around there! I am not sure if I understand it correctly but if I do....freaking sad ending.
I have reads it several times and I sense diferent interpretations. Take care.
Tim |
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