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Untitled Sonnet
Contributed by
butterflyperfect
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Wednesday, 14th January 2009 @ 10:51:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I sit here trying to understand why
Cause you are always a dream in my mind
No matter what I do, or what I try
It always seems that I’m a step behind
I’m striped of a feeling that I once had
And I know I can never have it back
You being so far away makes me sad
For you were the one that put me on track
So I just say come here and be what may
And let me feel your breath upon my skin
Hold me tenderly and forever stay
Don’t ever let love end, only begin
Now I will be waiting for you to see
That you need to come near and be with me
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butterflyperfect
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2009-01-14 10:51:24]
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Re: Untitled Sonnet
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 14th January 2009 @ 01:01:25 PM AEST
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Short but sweet write, I liked the tenderness within the words.
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Re: Untitled Sonnet
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by spanky on
Wednesday, 14th January 2009 @ 01:31:16 PM AEST
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Beautiful from beginning to end.
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Re: Untitled Sonnet
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th January 2009 @ 06:21:17 PM AEST
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stunningly beautiful. i really think that you've captured the essence of what sonnets are all about. it flowed perfectly (yes perfectly!) and was so deep and passionate. it reminded me why i love the sonnet so much. fantastic work.
with love,
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