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Burn
Contributed by
juliette
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Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 04:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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What bloomed from proud innocence
shaken up one to many times-
However tempted, resilient before a rushed trip, alone in unchartered territory-
Swept away and swallowed whole-
Spit out viciously and wandering again, aimlessly toward you.
Now a bothersome blossom, boasting a new glow-
Out of the darkness of levity,
A faint whisper of forgiveness-
To shallow beneath the pounding of passion,
A flame left passively to burn out.
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juliette
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2003-03-22 16:25:00]
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Re: Burn
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 10:58:48 PM AEST
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Wow! that's really a nice poem!
How about Passions Innocence,
or Enflamed Passion!!! "Burn" just doesn't
suit this poems beauty!
Angel always...Godspeed! 0:-) |
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Re: Burn
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by loveisendless on
Monday, 23rd June 2003 @ 12:27:56 AM AEST
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| Now that's the kind of stuff that will BURN in every bodies heart!Please keep the flames going,by writing more just like that!!!!!! |
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