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I need to kill you
Contributed by
ZenP
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Tuesday, 13th January 2009 @ 03:15:30 PM in AEST
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How can i Be able to give everything up.
But you, your face, your memory, your touch, your smile.
I can not let go!
Why cant i let you go?
For you to just disappear, from My dreams and my thoughts!
Then why do i still find myself building my dreams around you, My hope, my Will,
My essence!
I ask my heart each day do i love you? But it does not want to respond, doesn't budge.
It will not want to listen!
Is this love?
is this love?
Is it?
Can you tell me?
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ZenP
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2009-01-13 15:15:30]
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Re: I need to kill you
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 13th January 2009 @ 05:28:47 PM AEST
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The title and the poem so very different. It is not at all what I expected. Terrific write and I am glad you do not feel you need to kill anyone lol. Maybe just the thought and longing right??
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Re: I need to kill you
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by spanky on
Tuesday, 13th January 2009 @ 07:12:06 PM AEST
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